When I see her smile
All I wish is to make her mine
When she looks into my eyes
She wants me to be hers is all I see
The longing that she has, I hear it in her voice
When I hold her hand, the warmth I get
Makes me believe in love
When we stroll around the park
Gives gratification to my soul
When we cuddle, the faith increases
That she’ll always be there for me
Never could we be separated by our own
But the world we see will always be a barrier
The love we share will never be diminished
Even though the distances may increase
My heart will always cry for her
No matter with who I am
12 comments:
Nice one..bt kheru last 2 lines r nt goin good
"My heart will always cry for her
No matter with who I am " !!!!!
Move on from the heartbroken stage :P....dil khush rakh apna usko rulla mat...:P..jiske sath bhi hai aish kar bakke itna gyan kyun sochna....Gyan he badanta rahe jayega mujhe lag raha hai is bolg pe...implement karne ki soch yeh lines...hehhehe
abe ye koi meri life ki situation nahi hai....ye to ek tute dil ki kahani hai :P
aur vaise bhi 'cry' thoda poem ko bhaari banane ke liye daala hai
uski jagah 'yearn' daala tha
Hii Piyu..."tujh me hai wo baat"...padega india to badega india wali baat lagne lagi hai...waise ye tuta dil tera hi lag rha hai....u knw poem is really good, even the ending part also....but tujhe nhi lagta ki tu pehli wali k liye cry karta rahega to dusri wali "SENSE OF BELONGINGNESS" nhi feel kregi..he he....
is baar jawab ki darkaar hai is nacheez ko!!!!
point hai kheria...toota dil tera he lag raha hai....
chalo maan liya...lekin poems are way different than the real life...
ek word galat ho gaya hai isme...I admit :)
'cry' ki jagah 'yearn' daalna chahiye tha...
aur me defend nahi karunga...me agar kisi ko gyan dunga to yehi kahunga ke... move on :)
on the contrary i feel it's very neat.. since i dont know abt ur personal life so much,so don't know what you have going on n all but i as an outsider i could most definately relate to it...
will wait for the next one....
isey kehte hai chit b meri pat b meri...wasie move on ka funda sahi hai...tumhara experience bolta hai bhai...
I am sure you are talking about the sexy and stunning Yamaha R1 :P ..are u ??
kherie ishq sabko shayar bana deta hai.. btw nice poem..
@bhatia - use kar le yeh poem...kisi ko pata bhi ni chalega k yeh kherie ne likhi hai :D
Yaar its really touchy, simlple and lovable.
I think you have loved some one in your life........
leave it but after reading it i have smile on my face......
continue buddy...........
hum aapki nayi bandish ka intezaar kr rahe hai!!! :)
itne bhaari bhaari words ka usage..
dictionary sath mein rakh kar padhni padegi poems :P
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