Sitting on the porch
Under the mystic clouds
Waiting for the rain to pour
Down on me with all its might
Thinking about home, where I sat
Resting on the small window
Seeing the world through
Sitting on the porch
Watching kids playing in the mud
Plucking flowers while they still bud
Floating paper boats
Just to watch them go bloats
Hearing parents calling out
Names after every small bout
Sitting on the porch
Watching leaves sparkling with hint of sunlight
And drenched streets gleaming in the night
The dripping water over broken panes
Washing the muck off my brains
The sweet smell emanating from earth
Making me believe what I’ve lost for my girth
Sitting on the porch
When I look around
The alien wetness on the ground
Trickling drops making surreal sound
Whispering in my ears, telling me to unbound
Sitting on the porch
I ask myself, is it worth
The time here I spend in dearth
6 comments:
Nice one ... I was reading another one of your poems the other day .. and I thought I should also get back to poems for once, so I wrote one :) Thanks for inspiration
Hey peeyush i never miss following ur lyrics man... infact i have become a big fan of u... i like that feel u create in ur lyrics, and it is veryh easy to visualize them, it looks lik ur words r coming from lot pain... i use to admire ur love lyrics and this time u hav comeup with nature and kids innocence tat wud be kinda difficult for anybody but u actually continue to impress with these too... all the best 4 rest..
an artist sees what is and creates a masterpeice of things others refused to understand..
u're a gud artist of words..coz while reading ur poems we can place ur words into images and njoy them..
waiting for more poems..:)
It is a really nice one ... you are a good poet so never stop your thoughts from flowing on the paper .... u should try writing to papers and magazines too ... and if possible get a small book made of all your poems ... u can start selling from Unicel !! :)
hmm.. good one.. sabne bahut tareef kar rakhi hai, isliye merse ho hi nai paayi.. :P
Hey Peeyush
Nice ones.
cant believe that these are written by u only..!!
So well written
Dnt u think u shud think abt Krupa's Comment. !!
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